"Oh You Haunt Me So".......What would you feel if your girl's presence is with you all the time?

I agree about the "seesaw" since everything else is clean and precise. Simple fix. I like the speaker's sincerity, as though he really loves the girl. I ume that the speaker feels a tad threatened due to the clever word, "stalking." There is the comic touch at the end concerning the bathroom. If you were to send this to your beloved, I would cut out the comedy in the end if you wanted it to be purely romantic...depends on the girl. I wonder about the quotes in the second stanza. I don't understand the use for them the way I do see the use for them for the last line. It's a lovely poem. Due to the ending (last stanza), it sort of mocks the conventional romantic poem. Sorry that I'm not technically answering the question about a girl's presence being with me. I wouldn't mind the idea of being haunted by a man's presence if I love him (except for "protocols"). Seems natural. Then again, I'm a romantic.